All right, my dear readers, I am offering you the opportunity to tell me what to do! But before I let you do that, I am dutifully checking in with my LIterate Kitten-inspired writing accountability report for the week. Let’s see, getting this one out of the way as soon as possible: DID NOT work on my novel. However, I did accomplish a few other writing-related tasks.
- I wrote something for my blog every day.
- I finished reading Three Cups of Tea, and began A Free Life by Ha Jin. Also began reading Jhumpa Lahiri’s new collection of short stories, Unaccustomed Earth. The first story in the collection brought me to tears, and I will have to write more about this book after I’ve finished reading it.
- Did several writing exercises.
- Met with a couple of my writer friends to chat over coffee and share our writing exercises.
- Thought about snakes, became obsessed with reading about snake symbology, working on a piece about my snake experiences.
So, not too bad, all in all. And now, here’s your chance. Below, I’ve posted four story beginnings that I wrote the other day in response to this exercise:
Today’s exercise is this: in five minutes, write as many beginnings as you can that have to do with food. Write one, two, eleven, whatever you can do. Again, by a “beginning” I mean anything from a sentence fragment to three full sentences, but no more than that per beginning.
For our next meeting, my writer friends and I are going to finish something we’ve started. I figure, why not just finish one of the stories that I wrote beginning lines for. And why not let you all vote on which one I should finish? So, below are my four beginnings. Leave a comment saying which one you’d like me to develop into a story, and the one that gets the most votes wins! After I finish the story, I’ll post it on my blog, no matter how bad it is! Yes, I am offering to share my bad writing with you!
Okay, here are the choices:
1. Even with the Feds hot on his tail, Antonio always made it a point to stop in at Maude’s for a slice of cherry pie.
2. Why Ricky decided we needed to hunt and eat a squirrel, I’ll never know. But that was when all the trouble started.
3. How many love affairs have begun with strawberries and champagne, and ended with tuna scraped out of a can, while standing over the kitchen sink?
4. Some moms are all love and chocolate cake and warm noodle casseroles. Mine was more half-rotten apples and stale saltine crackers.
May 9, 2008 at 11:25 am
I’d have to say #3 the love affair although they all look like they would be very intriguing! I’m eager to see how the story will develop!
May 9, 2008 at 11:43 am
I like #3 best because it’s structured very well as a single sentence and also is quite visual. That sentence is a perfect beginning for a short story.
#4 is pretty good too. It’s ‘earthy’ and the story that comes out of it probably will interest me more than the story of #3, but I might come to like this one best if you should fit it into the single-sentence form of the other.
May 9, 2008 at 11:46 am
Number 3 is great, I’d go with that one.
May 9, 2008 at 12:54 pm
I like to know about hunting and eating a squirrel.
May 9, 2008 at 12:55 pm
I hate to sound samey but number 3 is the one that most intrigued me.
May 9, 2008 at 12:58 pm
I vote for number 2 because it sounds as if the story to follow will be the most interesting. I think the second sentence should go, though, and be replaced with something with action in it. For example, “One moment we were sprawled on the couch watching an “I Love Lucy” rerun and drinking Buds, and the next, Ricky was fumbling through his keys for the one that opened his shotgun cabinet and yelling, “Get your coat on, woman. We’ve got some hunting to do!”
May 9, 2008 at 2:04 pm
I’m most intrigued with the possibilities of #2. I can’t wait to see what comes of this!
May 9, 2008 at 2:44 pm
I like the squirrel one!
May 9, 2008 at 2:58 pm
#3
May 9, 2008 at 9:43 pm
I vote for Ricky & the squirrel one… as long as the squirrel doesn’t actually get eaten!!!
May 9, 2008 at 9:44 pm
& wow yogamum, you’ve done A LOT this week!!!
May 9, 2008 at 10:11 pm
#3 also grabbed me, possibly because I’m in the mood for reading about lerve …
Glad to hear that your snakes have provided you with so much inspiration!
May 10, 2008 at 9:12 am
I loved Lahiri’s first collection and am anxious to read this one. I mean to buy it in hardcover (if it came out in hardcover, perhaps it didn’t?) and give her some love that way. She’s a wonderful writer.
May 10, 2008 at 2:51 pm
I think number 1. Just to be a contrarian.
What did you think of A Free Life? I liked Waiting. At first, I didn’t, but it grew on me.
Looking forward to reading your snake musings.
May 10, 2008 at 4:52 pm
I vote for #4. It’s the one I could most sense as an unfolding. Looking forward to seeing which you choose and what you do with it. Isn’t Fess up Friday great? By the way I loved Three Cups of Tea.
May 11, 2008 at 1:09 am
[...] story Yogamum didn’t write… Posted on May 11, 2008 by Ovidia Since dear Yogamum’s going with her story option #1, I’m putting down my version of what #3 could have [...]
May 11, 2008 at 6:52 pm
Hi Yogamum! Glad you don’t mind… & I realize now it should have been option #2 not #3!
May 11, 2008 at 8:32 pm
Three Cups of Tea is such a wonderful book! Hope you liked it.
May 12, 2008 at 8:17 am
I would love to read #3! Really really!
May 12, 2008 at 11:02 am
Okay, folks, I think #3 is it!!!
Thanks for voting!
Gee, now I actually have to write it!